I love me some hockey stories. It's awesome. I wish you'd keep writing it

update

DUDE YOUR STORY FREAKING ROCKS! UPDATE SOON!!

Not bad.

"Naive" not "native," completely different things. Though it was rather annoying, it was only error I really noticed.

Great story so far! Please keep up the good work.

ha. this is cute.
cant wait for more.

but what level of a team do they play for if its not pro?
is it like a club team?

good plot line so far.
lacking in detail

hah! very funny. update soon!

bwahaha, a girl's revenge in the best. lol. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

on the last sentence (“Thanks.” I skated away to get ready for day two of practice.) you don't need the of in between the two and practice. i really like your story so far. how old is she?

i love this story! Aidan is a boss! keep up the good work, i can't wait for the next one =]

Oh, yay! Aiden is finally hitting back. ;) I like the way this story is working out!

I love it! Really great! Cant think of anything else to say so...update soon!

I have to say your story caught my eye right off the bat. I've loved hockey since I was a little girl! I used to play street hockey out on my street on roller blades with my dad and brother, which was a blast. I love that you have a character who is tough, and isn't afraid to play with the boys, AND is stubborn enough to not want to quit when she gets her ** checked several times, especially when it's by a guy who happens to be her favorite player! You've got a good thing going here that has the potential to grow into a great story.

My main negative is that you didn't describe your characters. I want to get a sense of what your characters look like from your eyes. I already enjoy the interaction between her and Logan! Sarcasm is always a plus in my world haha!! There wasn't anything else besides little tinny typos, (I could be wrong, but I think you meant naive instead of native.)

Overall I love it so far! I hope you continue writing (: I would love to read more!

~L.E.