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| superficialSagacity 2008-03-06 ch 2,  | abuseAH! You're right that if you made them together, it wouldn't be unique... BUT IT MAKES IT SO SAD! I love it though! |
| SecondHandSonata 2008-03-06 ch 2, | abuseHey! Great story! I loved the end the way it was, altough I desperately want those two to get skip towards each other in a field of daises, it's infinately beter your way. =) I do have to say, they get a bit repetitive. A few too many blue eyes references on her part, and too much, 'What would the guys think?' on his. Other than that, the story is great! Great job, and I can't wait for more! Love, Salvation ala mode |
| Beautiful. Insane. Perfect. 2008-03-05 ch 2, | abuseOh how cute^_^ ...is that it? D: Well...this is going onto my favourites list...along with the other hundreds (okai, exaggeration...) of stories =P Love your way! ~Lemonx xx |
| mickeyyearbook 2008-03-05 ch 2, | abusei may sound retarded but when you said "that's it" in your authors note in the second chapter did you mean that's the end of the story? i'll be heartbroken! i wanted to see them get together, these first two chapters were the perfect set up to a longer story |
| Syn871 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseYour characters are adorkable! LOL jkjk But, yeah, this is an amazing one-shot. The romance's I come up with are crap. where do you get your inspiration? |
| Beautiful. Insane. Perfect. 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseCute=] Will there be any more? I'd love to see how this turns out=] ~Lemonz xx |
| Bazooka Joy 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed what you got so far. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Sounds really vague I know but it's all I could muster at the moment. |