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| simpleplan13 2008-03-02 ch 1,  | abuseInfinite gallons of tears that has been shed...have GO AWAY FROM HERE BEFORE CERTAIN THINGS WILL HAPPEN.. I think is is too vague and takes away from the powerfulness of the next few more descriptive lines I really like the ending... it being about emotions and not a person was a surprise and a really interesting one.. nice job |