Starts normal then get's hotter as you go. Great technique for this kind of story! :) Nice job with it!

Aww! I must say this is one of the better written shounen-ai stories out there, and I commend you for that! It was amazing! But I must ask something…
I need more!
Give me meh fix Mrs. baesonata!

cute

AW KAWAII~

That was so beautifully written..so adorable! Thanks for sharing. 8D

More? :)

Aw.
That is so sweet! :]

This is a well-told and well-written shounen-ai and it's refreshing to find something that is good out there. Honestly I'm a little dissapointed in the shounen-ai writers here for their lack of originality. As a shounen-ai writer of 7 years here I congradulate you on a story well-written. I'll definitely come back to read more of this one and if you want, feel free to check out some of my works too.

aww!
how sweet
:D