I liked it Wolfie! Slash Panda/Wolf. I always thought you were leaning that way when rping them. xD

it's good actually... but i have to agree to wow... name your characters well... the scence was good, full of animosity and lust, but the names... panda made it all awkward and creepy and funny... but all in all... i would rate it a 4 out of 5-5 out of 5 if you will change panda's name...

Hmm...

There's a story behind Panda's name.

He was supposed to be a cat, then he turned into a human with cat ears/tail/claws etc, then I just made him human.

I could have used Pandafang- his cat name, but then it would have been weirder, and I would have been copywriting from the Warriors series somehow... I think.

Besides, Panda is a cute name.

I wonder if any of that made the slightest bit of sense. Oh, well.

Well, actually, I never got past the first line because I burst into laughter.

Panda?

Bahahahahaha-hahahah-hah-ah.

Sorry, but please, PLEASE name your characters better.

I'm sure otherwise, this would have been a great story.