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| Angry Nerd 2008-03-14 ch 1,  | abuseLove it, |
| LucienofShadow 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseI don't care who this offends. Never take it down. Ever. Now, for the most part your (well, the angel's) statements are on point and logical. There is, however, at least one exception. Mary and Joseph were not married at the time of the 'immaculate conception.' Just betrothed. As long as you keep your 'facts' straight, this is a rather strong piece. Love the ending. -Lucien of the Review Marathon (link in profile) |
| ServalSpotz 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseOh, I loved it. Hilarious, and well written. I just don't understand why anyone would insist that He's perfect, when He's obviously not. Great way to point that out. As you may have already noticed, I'm not offended. :) |
| YourFavouritePlushie 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseI love this, it is really good. Great job! |
| asylum writer 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseIt's not offensive, so long as people understand the concept of satire. Well, everything ends up offending someone, but I wasn't offended. Anyway, it was humorous. I love the idea of "God, who was now sitting at his desk scribbling down some more ideas for new and improved ducks," Hilarious. And the ending was good. |
| Queen of the Shadylands 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseI like it. I wonder if it was a simular arguement that got Lucifer sent to hell. |
| Searbear 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseSylvia I loved it, you will get an a for sure unless Mr Clipsby is mean. |