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| NathanDavis 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseVery creepy, and nice and fast-paced. Could stand to be fleshed out a little, and there were some typos here and there, but I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. |
| freaky.little.devil 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abuseHah. This actually reminds me of the book I'm reading now. ('Hideaway' by Dean Koontz. If you haven't read it, I'd suggest you do so, it's so awesome!) So, this story is good, but it kinda felt like it went a little too fast towards the end. If you ever were to rewrite this, maybe you should put more information in about the other 'pieces' in Theodore's collection. It's just a thought. |
| Sniper LCM 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseThat is frikin creepy and as I read i almost crapped myself. WHICH IS A GOOD SIGN. Keep up the good work man! |
| Rock Music is my Muse 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseChilling, but so, so good. |