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| bored asian dork 2008-08-05 ch 1,  | abusewooh! love it! |
| cyanidecandy 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseah ! i understand. short and sweet :) |
| Tobyk947 2008-03-08 ch 2, | abuseWho's confused? if your comprehension level is above three year old, i'm pretty sure they would've gotten it. Though, not always. Keep at it. |
| Tobyk947 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abusesounds awesome! keep writing! |
| BL0ND33-X 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseclumsybella15, I think the author means that she was dead emotionally, but she was now experiencing a physical death. Anyway, I loved it. :) Jessicaa x |
| artificial destiny 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseLOL nice. im actually writing about a similar thing (except much much longer ;D) and its not so happy :O but i like it. its ... fluffy. and really short lol keep writing! maybe its a prologue? talk more about her emotions... does she really want this death? does she accept it? any regrets? sorry thats just me and my curiosity -artificial destiny pls r/r back! |
| Scarlett Wynter 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I like it, but I feel that this should be written as a poem. |
| clumsybella15 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseI like it, but you should make it longer. I don't understand exactly what's going on and it's not a good thing. If she's dead then how come she's drowning, if she's dead then shouldn't she be in heaven, hell or just not exist anymore? |