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Written
2008-03-07
ch 1,
abuse"i want your name
off of my tongue,
my red lips
and slow lungs."

there's so much rhythm in these lines, I just love it.
Realilly
2008-03-03
ch 1,
abuseO I like this. Pretty, and a strong hint of liberty.
siphoned afterglow
2008-03-03
ch 1,
abuseto me it was about people interfering too much and trying to figure out more than they should. maybe it came across to me that way because i'm going through stuff like that now.
anyway, I love the feeling generated of it. great work
Cupids.Broken.Arrow
2008-03-02
ch 1,
abusedeep 0_0
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