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| Emilyne Willowar 2008-05-10 ch 1,  | abuseOkay, time to take a look at this. =) First of all, I am so, SO glad that you seem to know basic grammar and spelling. This makes it some much easier to read, and doesn't cause my eyes to bleed. I also love your style; it flows really well, and reminds me a lot of Austen (who also happens to be my favorite author). I haven't spotted anything really wrong with this, but reading more should give me a better sense of the plot. |
| MC Tane 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseVery great musings, I must say, buta bit too convoluted. |
| A. V. Berdys 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseI like how you've adopted a prose that is very reminiscent to writing in the 19th century. Detailed and intriguing. |