This was really funny and cute! Happy Thanksgiving! Anyway, the only thing I didn't like was how fast the transition from past to present was. No big deal though. Enjoy Thanksgiving today and God Bless!

This is really good, I never thought of writing this way its a really funny perspective. But i agree it would be nicer if the ending had a punch line. Other than that it was a very entertaining story, keep up the good work!

Hahaha this was the English assignment right?

I love this story. Very amusing.

That is cute and clever.

I both like and dislike the way that everyone plays such stereotypical roles.

I do like the subtle human nuances - changing friends - hands intertwined. etc..

I only wish the ending had more punch to it. If you could tell us where she fell asleep this year (the cranberries? the gravy?) it would add more laughter.

good job

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I liked this alot! And I eat cranberry jelly (it's one of my favorites!) but I don't eat the bowl only a worse idiot than me would do THAT!

Write on!

This is so funny! I've never thought about how a pepper-shaker feels when I use it... it'll bother me now (in a good way). I hope you keep writing this- people need to take themselves more lightly!