Aw, I love you too sweetie. Damnation is paradise if I have you in my arms.

Look on the bright side of life =D

wow, darkness

wow, so i expect to read this sweet poem about a bf and gf (i didn't look at the genre) and then i read 'hell' and 'damned'
lol way to surprise the reader
i like it though, it has a finality to it at the very end that i absolutely love
well done:)