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| Ana 2008-06-30 ch 7, anon. | abuseI LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I think this is probably one of the best plots I've read in a while. You are a great writer and every chapter is better than the last. I love your character and I like Kain and his boyz. Though Fiona has only really interacted with Mickee I would like the see her with the rest of the crew. Until next time. ^.~ ~Ana~ |
| Moppet 2008-06-03 ch 7,  | abuseYou need to update! |
| Moppet 2008-06-03 ch 5, | abuseWow! Quick thinking on Kain's part.lol |
| Moppet 2008-06-03 ch 2, | abuseI'm sorry I just love Kain even if he's a sleezeball. He's a hot sleezeball. |
| Moppet 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is pretty cool. Like it alot. |
| stranger with your doorkey 2008-06-02 ch 7, | abusethe plot thickens!! i'm so glad that she's finally admitting to herslef that she likes him. :) it makes things much easier on me. update soon! ~stranger |
| Bazooka Joy 2008-05-30 ch 7, | abuseI wonder who the mystery girl is that's back in town... |
| Bazooka Joy 2008-05-29 ch 6, | abuseOh wow...his mother wants them to LIVE together? Just...wow. I simply don't understand her change of heart, even if she wanted to change his room into an office. I guess I'll find out... |
| CR7GIRL 2008-05-25 ch 7, | abusei love kain! |
| CR7GIRL 2008-05-17 ch 6, | abuseLMAO Mrs. Shinoda is awesome! i can't wait to see how this all works out :) |
| LadyluckAJ 2008-05-17 ch 6, | abuseI loved that ending. His mother is slick...lol too funny. I wonder how things are going to be with them living together. |
| J.Lynn-a writer 2008-05-17 ch 3, anon. | abuseToo lazy to sign on. So, I know it annoys me when people read my stories and don't review, so I'm going to review this. The story is line is very interesting. The only thing I must mention is to watch your comma usage. I can't really explain it better than that. Otherwise, good job! I hope I have time to read the rest of the story later! - J. Lynn |
| Saamii 2008-05-17 ch 6, | abusehaha, i'm reading this chapter at 3.00 in the morning and have been internally laughing the whole time. kain (and his family) are off their rocker in some instances and fiona just can't catch a break. write more soon. |
| whitney92 2008-05-16 ch 6, | abuseKain's mom cracks me up lol. Now they're going to be living together... that should prove to be interesting lol |
| CR7GIRL 2008-04-27 ch 5, | abusehahah his parents are funny. they sound liek mine when i was in high school. |