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R. A. Grough
2008-07-05
ch 1,
abuseOoh goosebumps! And tears in my eyes. Dude.
Taltush/MeiMei
2008-03-12
ch 1,
abuse"And id be the one on" I'd.

I think that the content of this poem is really great. It's emotional and touching and is so easy to understand and relate to, especially for those who have lost people close to them. I do, however, feel that the flow could use a bit of work. It's kind of awkward. On the other hand, it leaves a lasting impression. So I don't know. Either way, it's a very good poem.
CreativeSprite
2008-03-02
ch 1,
abuseThis poem is very beautiful and sad. I had an aunt that died of cancer, I’m very sorry about Jeff.
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