Really pleased to find this as I haven't had much luck finding short stories on here. I really felt for Kris in the this, and I'm glad that there was a positive note to the ending. I liked the last line about playing only for him.

So sad...but very powerful in its own way. Great view on closure.

I loved that last one the most!
It had just the right amount of sappiness and sadness.
I look forward to more!

These are awesome! They're really well written. And unlike a lot of one-shots, they get the whole story across fluidly.

I can't wait for more!

so i find this chapter adorable. tattoos are wonderful.
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Great so far! Keep it up! :D

This is amazing ...
when i have more time i will read more ...

loved it ...


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Oh, poor girl. That mean, mean boy. And he used every excuse there was (and did the typical blame reversal as well). I really liked the dialogue (I'm horrible at dialogue).

Keep up the good work. You deserve more reviews.

So was Shane a normal person who died (was shot) and became a demon or was he always that way?

This one made me cackle at the evilness in it. You had a few spelling and grammar issues, but other than that it was good.

I liked the concept of this one. The beginning was excellent, but I think the end was...too fast, it was like warp speed. It could have been drawn out a bit more.

Again, I liked how love didn't conquer all.

This is cute. I like how you don't make them fall madly in love and it's a dream come true, there's just a chance that he'll become another story for her.

Even though this really only had one person actually interacting in the story it felt like James too was an active character even if he wasn't there. And, boy, was that a long and oddly worded sentence.

I liked this story. So on to the next one.

so soft, bittersweet, and it holds so many painful memories to me. at alas, things must end sometimes.

very interesting writes. i like the second one better because it flowed more naturally than the first. i suggest you edited a bit...the flow of it was...very choppy.

That was great! :D Very cute. I think you could actually expand on it more. It would be a cute story. :)