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Abstruse Blue
2008-05-07
ch 4,
abuseI'm really enjoying this. I love it! I hope you don't mind me adding this to my C2 For Real Slash. :)
Zebbie
2008-05-04
ch 4,
abuseThis is really sweet. Nice easy read and interesting, consistent characters. Looking forward to more!
Zeb
Jabberwocky 101
2008-05-03
ch 4,
abuseThis is a great story. Something people can pretty much relate to. My social life is equivalant to Matthews, so its easy to image how he feels. I like that there's no Deus es Machina kinda thing going on, it's just two guys that become friends and so on. I really like all the characters, too. Great job. I'll wait (im)patiently for the next chapter.
Balliett
2008-04-15
ch 4,
abuseAw, this story is so incredibly sweet. Simplistically written with just the right touch of friendly humor. I have enjoyed reading it so far. =D

Julie is cute. Mattie--I gave Matthew a special nickname xD--is so loveable with his socially awkward personality; I wanna huggle him. And Caleb is just too cool, man. Love your characters! They're quite believable and easy to like and they have depth too.

Poor Julie. That is quite the sob story for a little girl. It makes me want to shower her in ice cream and teddy bears.

I just have one suggestion. Add a bit of description and flair to your stories. Less telling, more showing. -nod, nod-

Anywho, I was quite taken with this story and await the next chapter eagerly. Excellent job, love. ^^
Switch
2008-04-13
ch 4,
abuseI really really like this story. Your characters are very well developed and the plot line is interesting and moving well. Can't wait to read the next chapter! ^_^
capricasix
2008-04-07
ch 4,
abuseAw I like it a lot! Keep up the awesome work!
Miss Mysty
2008-04-07
ch 4,
abuseYay, new chapter! I don't know why, but I totally expected a scene at the end where Caleb is sneaking into his apartment, turns on the light, and there's Melissa, calmly asking where he's been.

Ah, well. Good luck with writing the next chapter!
Gravilove19
2008-04-06
ch 4,
abuseHmm...sounds to me like Melissa knows that Matthew is gay...and is a bit of a homophobe. Just a guess xD I can't wait to find out what will happen when Caleb finds out about Matthew. Great job, good luck with finals and homework ^.^

Huey
2008-04-06
ch 4, anon.
abuseI really love your story! It's really nice how the characters are so normal and 'real' I guess. It's not some big drama-fest this way or that way and there's no "I'm in love with you but going out with him while cheating on her cause etc...etc." And I love how I can enjoy reading through an entire chapter of them just talking and not find it boring. And yeah,
gummybaby
2008-04-06
ch 4,
abuseAw, those two make such a cute couple. And that was such a date...thanks for the update, you rock!
NOT an emo freak
2008-04-06
ch 4,
abuseyay! finally! i was just thinking about this story earlier this week or month or something. anyway. Melissa is such a little b!tch!! good chapter! i love Caleb!! so adorable!
Back of Beyond
2008-04-06
ch 4,
abuseLove this story already, update soon please! xD
Pundit
2008-04-06
ch 4,
abuseHow can Caleb still be hanging out with all his (Melissa's) high school friends if he moved from Texas when he was 19? Did all of his high school friends migrate with them? Or is he only friends with all of Melissa's college friends? For some reason I was under the impression that Caleb had been locked in the same social circle for the past decade. I will have to re-read. Also, I totally bet Melissa is a homophobe because she secretly suspects Caleb is homosexual/bi-curious(aka: ambi-sextrous) and so she's taking out her insecurities on Matthew. Aw, I love Matthew. He's so adorably cuddlesome.
Lac3d w1th p01s0n
2008-04-06
ch 4,
abuseBy my own rule, I never review two chapters in a row, but that's what I'm doing... Guh, Freaking AWESOME STORY! I wish there were more to read *sniffle* b-but there's not. Pleaase update soon!!
L0v3,
P0!s0n
Gravilove19
2008-03-30
ch 3,
abuseI can't wait for your next update. Pore Matthew ): is it because she knows he is gay >.>;
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