You have great male leads. I love Crowley, and now I love Keir!

Wow! That's all I can say. This story made me cry...I am a complete and total sap. I am severely disappointed that she had to go back to earth, but it did need to happen. You are an amazing writer and you talent is overwhelming. Thank you so much for such an amazing book. I have come to love your charactors and hope that you have success in all that you do.

Really wonderful end to the story. Thanks so much for writing this :)

Hope to see more from you in the future!

~Carm~

Very nice chapter.And I just realized something:I'm almost exactly like your character.






-Vampriss2

Finally, I've finished reading the first book. I'm glad to see that mostly everyone is alive. With Kaie leaving, I can hardly imagine what those four feel like, Kaie, Keir, Vincent, and Thomas. Long or final good-byes are they're own form of tragedies. Nice scenes at the end with Kaie and her mother, Keir's song, and poor Keir alone in his home.

The punctuation and misspellings started to become really noticeable in the end. Not to be repetitive or annoying but sometimes you missed whole words. Easy enough to edit over if you have the time.

I can't wait to read the second AAOAT. I just know it's going to be great. Thank you for continuing this wonderfully great story :).

Watch out, Kaie's packing heat (literally) :). I hope that she'll be able to get stronger but maybe now she can protect Keir and return the favor.

I won't speculate anymore until I read the other chapters, but I'm excited to find out more about Cerdwin's Five.

I've been distracted between school and my own story so I didn't get a chance to review your story as often, sorry about that. I wish I could upload my chapters as quickly as you do :).

Adorable...even though I'm a guy I still admit that Vincent is adorable from your description. It's nice that he isn't an annoying talking sidekick and is helping get her powers. Poor Keir, it's got to be hard for him to take so much pain. Good for him, cracking Matthias's head, he deserved it.

I noticed there have been more spelling errors then usual. They're mostly small, but I don't recall many in earlier chapters. No real cause for concern. The dialog, characters and plot keep this story afloat.

I finally get to review Ch.9. I really am sorry that I can't read the chapters in one go, but I still say that your doing a good job.

The scene with Gredge is touching and I know that the whole affair had to be hard for poor Kaie. I really hope that she and Keir can reach a happy ending. I also hope that the witch and Beacon get what they got coming to them...soon.

Such a sad ending! But absolutely fantastic - I loved it! But I am so, so glad that you didn't just leave it like that, and I'm off to read Book Two!

Brilliant!

Aww - Kaie has to go home! Its so hard, because she can't stay in Deverell and Keir can't go to earth... so sad.

But I do agree - Fallon the Faun is awesome, and if you ever write that story about him I shall most definately read it!

Fantastic chapter - thanks for such an early-morning update! Love this story - I'm officially addicted!

Great chapter, I hope we get to see more of Tully. She's a nice character. I wonder if her potions will come in handy ;).

I love your use of irony with some of the sweetest characters being so irritating or downright hostile. Although Pixie is just annoying. I can see that the plot is definitely picking up with Keir and Kaie being caught by a sorceress and taken to the king of the unicorns. Man, I really have to keep up now.

Ahh! Evil cliffie! Yay - Thomas survived! I always liked him!

Poor Keir, he has to be okay! You can't kill him off! Please update soon *does puppy dog eyes* You can't keep me in this suspense!

OH! Exciting! I really liked this chapter - especially the scene with Vincent in the bath! I can't wait to see what happens next - update soon!

Yay! An update! Fantastic, as usual, and I really like the sound of Vincent, I can't wait to see more of him. Also it's great to see the romance beginning, and for Kaie to start to feel, if not accept, some more-than-friendship emotions towards Keir.

Anyway, I loved it, and can't wait for the next chapter!

I love everything about this story! You're doing a phenomenal job, and I really can't wait for more :)

~Carm~