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| Andrea Lotte 2008-04-08 ch 1,  | abuseI quite liked this...I think I understood this one a little more than the other more obscure things you've written that I've read. I love the last line. |
| alittlebitconfused 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseWow, I really like it! I really like the repeated phrase of: "--A wonder?" You describe the senses really well! Awesome poem! |