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| TragicDreams 2008-08-02 ch 1,  | abuseIt's very dreamy and memory like so I think you got the childhood memory very well. Nice Job! |
| Koki Enwai 2008-07-17 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow. Simple but amazing. You have a knack for writing haikus, certainly! I loved it! - Koki |
| Twilight Starr 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuseMy favorite was the first line. It really paints a picture. Nice work. Have a lovely day and a brilliant summer. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Thoughtful Silence 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseI loved this. The subtle word choice is excellent- the kinda imagery of fragile beauty instilled within each one well done. Good job! -T.S. |
| AHHxAMY 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abusevery simple. i usually dont care for a poem of few words but, i like it. |
| Painted.Illusion 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful, remindes me of my early childhood. |
| S. Ben Beach 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abusegood work! the last line really delivered the punch. keep it up :) |
| Chidori Nadare 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseThere is a very subtle, gentle beauty in this. I find this poem very pretty, delicate and mysterious in its tone. Great job. -C.N |
| Ygg 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseLove the mysterious undertone, the delicate imagery and the subtle beauty of this Haiku! Wow marvelous poem I'd say! Keep up the good work! |
| Dreaming Chica 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseWow you chose such beautiful words! They really add a certain feeling to the poem! Well Done! ♥ Dreaming Chica ♥ |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abusevery pretty... I love the alliteration in the second line... really awesome piece |
| doxology 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseNice haiku. I've been there. Peace & Love ~> Hp :) |