Reviews for Dandelion
Abbytjie 6/29/12 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Very peaceful. A really lovely poem.
Little girl Big world 10/25/09 . chapter 1
I love the word choice in this. Such a lovely haiku! :)
Mirrors Lie 1/7/09 . chapter 1
very simple but very pretty.

please R&R me.
Irresistible Apple 12/11/08 . chapter 1
I'm impressed by the imagery and meaning you managed to pack in to just 17 syllables! Lovely.
TragicDreams 8/2/08 . chapter 1
It's very dreamy and memory like so I think you got the childhood memory very well. Nice Job!
Koki Enwai 7/17/08 . chapter 1
Oh, wow. Simple but amazing. You have a knack for writing haikus, certainly! I loved it!

- Koki
Twilight Starr 6/27/08 . chapter 1
My favorite was the first line. It really paints a picture. Nice work.

Have a lovely day and a brilliant summer.

Twilight Starr
Thoughtful Silence 5/28/08 . chapter 1
I loved this. The subtle word choice is excellent- the kinda imagery of fragile beauty instilled within each one well done. Good job!

-T.S.
AmyAnonymous 5/23/08 . chapter 1
very simple.

i usually dont care for a poem of few words but,

i like it.
Yellow Umbrella 4/26/08 . chapter 1
This is beautiful, remindes me of my early childhood.
S. Ben Beach 3/12/08 . chapter 1
good work! the last line really delivered the punch. keep it up :)
Chidori Nadare 3/8/08 . chapter 1
There is a very subtle, gentle beauty in this. I find this poem very pretty, delicate and mysterious in its tone. Great job.

-C.N
Ygg 3/4/08 . chapter 1
Love the mysterious undertone, the delicate imagery and the subtle beauty of this Haiku! Wow marvelous poem I'd say! Keep up the good work!
Dreaming Chica 3/3/08 . chapter 1
Wow you chose such beautiful words! They really add a certain feeling to the poem! Well Done!

Dreaming Chica
simpleplan13 3/3/08 . chapter 1
very pretty... I love the alliteration in the second line... really awesome piece
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