Beautiful. Very peaceful. A really lovely poem.

I love the word choice in this. Such a lovely haiku! :)

very simple but very pretty.

please R&R me.

I'm impressed by the imagery and meaning you managed to pack in to just 17 syllables! Lovely.

It's very dreamy and memory like so I think you got the childhood memory very well. Nice Job!

Oh, wow. Simple but amazing. You have a knack for writing haikus, certainly! I loved it!

- Koki

My favorite was the first line. It really paints a picture. Nice work.

Have a lovely day and a brilliant summer.

Twilight Starr

I loved this. The subtle word choice is excellent- the kinda imagery of fragile beauty instilled within each one well done. Good job!

-T.S.

very simple.

i usually dont care for a poem of few words but,

i like it.

This is beautiful, remindes me of my early childhood.

good work! the last line really delivered the punch. keep it up :)

There is a very subtle, gentle beauty in this. I find this poem very pretty, delicate and mysterious in its tone. Great job.

-C.N

Love the mysterious undertone, the delicate imagery and the subtle beauty of this Haiku! Wow marvelous poem I'd say! Keep up the good work!

Wow you chose such beautiful words! They really add a certain feeling to the poem! Well Done!

Dreaming Chica

very pretty... I love the alliteration in the second line... really awesome piece