|Reviews for Dandelion|
| Abbytjie 6/29/12 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Very peaceful. A really lovely poem.
| Little girl Big world 10/25/09 . chapter 1
I love the word choice in this. Such a lovely haiku! :)
| Mirrors Lie 1/7/09 . chapter 1
very simple but very pretty.
please R&R me.
| Irresistible Apple 12/11/08 . chapter 1
I'm impressed by the imagery and meaning you managed to pack in to just 17 syllables! Lovely.
| TragicDreams 8/2/08 . chapter 1
It's very dreamy and memory like so I think you got the childhood memory very well. Nice Job!
| Koki Enwai 7/17/08 . chapter 1
Oh, wow. Simple but amazing. You have a knack for writing haikus, certainly! I loved it!
| Twilight Starr 6/27/08 . chapter 1
My favorite was the first line. It really paints a picture. Nice work.
Have a lovely day and a brilliant summer.
| Thoughtful Silence 5/28/08 . chapter 1
I loved this. The subtle word choice is excellent- the kinda imagery of fragile beauty instilled within each one well done. Good job!
| AmyAnonymous 5/23/08 . chapter 1
i usually dont care for a poem of few words but,
i like it.
| Yellow Umbrella 4/26/08 . chapter 1
This is beautiful, remindes me of my early childhood.
| S. Ben Beach 3/12/08 . chapter 1
good work! the last line really delivered the punch. keep it up :)
| Chidori Nadare 3/8/08 . chapter 1
There is a very subtle, gentle beauty in this. I find this poem very pretty, delicate and mysterious in its tone. Great job.
| Ygg 3/4/08 . chapter 1
Love the mysterious undertone, the delicate imagery and the subtle beauty of this Haiku! Wow marvelous poem I'd say! Keep up the good work!
| Dreaming Chica 3/3/08 . chapter 1
Wow you chose such beautiful words! They really add a certain feeling to the poem! Well Done!
| simpleplan13 3/3/08 . chapter 1
very pretty... I love the alliteration in the second line... really awesome piece