Best mutiny ever! I hope Ruen at least got some good cake for his troubles.

Great first chapter ^^ Your writing was most certainly not crappy! It was a little short, but it was a good introduction- fun mixed with explaination! It's like having chocolate on your broccoli- except it sounds a lot better than it would be.. so scrap that metaphor and just know it was good.

"He could have laughed at the horrow that came to the humans brown eyes."

Horror? I didn't look too close, but that was the only one I found. ^^

Cheers, great start!