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| Akhdar 2008-07-08 ch 12,  | abuseThis story is really starting to pick up! I'm interested to see what happens and how things develop between her and Gray. Good job on the story structure, we have the kingdom itself with the various Domains as well as hints of possible tension in the future (ie Gray's sister). I also like these rules that the king has set down. Quick question: did a story such as Dante's Inferno play any part in inspiring this story? |
| Toreanie 2008-06-11 ch 2, | abuseI'm liking this. Grammar's excellent and the plot's getting interesting. The characters so far are nicely done. Pretty good, pretty good! I'll be reading more! |
| JoiZ. D 2008-05-31 ch 12, | abuseI really love your interludes, they are really deep and get your head cracking. :) Hope you keep up the good work and update soon! |
| JoiZ. D 2008-05-31 ch 11, | abuseOMG! WHAT HAPPENED! RAIN! NOO! Okay, calm down... breathe... Argh, dang it, their hands seperated!! What will happen to Rain? Gah, I better read on... p.s: Sorry for reviewing late... I had something on, then when I wanted to review the review button wouldn't work... |
| Silencia 2008-05-29 ch 12, | abuseDun Dunn Duun |
| Microsuede Mouse 2008-05-27 ch 12, | abuseWHOOAA So cool, Su-chan *w* |
| Microsuede Mouse 2008-05-26 ch 11, | abuseAIYA?! |
| Silencia 2008-05-26 ch 11, | abuseo.0 brilliant! cant wait for more! |
| daughterofmusic 2008-05-24 ch 10, | abuseWow, this is an incredible story... I'm still loving it! Keep it going! ~Music |
| Silencia 2008-05-16 ch 10, | abuseILOVE IT! Sorry for being so late, my dads been holding my laptop hostage for the whole week! And now I'm hoome alone, so I thought, lets check my e-mail and there I saw Wisher's new chappie! Grtz Silencia |
| Microsuede Mouse 2008-05-15 ch 10, | abuseAgain... Sorryy~ Now: Awesome! And *sniff* My eyes are all prickly... Also: I MADE A PREDICTION~ |
| JoiZ. D 2008-05-14 ch 10, | abuseAh... I wonder what was Grey's wish... Hmm. Anyway, good job on the chapter!! I enjoyed it. :) Hope you update soon! |
| JoiZ. D 2008-05-05 ch 9, | abuseHm... This is one of the best fantasy stories I've ever read! Good job! Now I'm itching for the next chapter to be posted, hope you update soon!! THANKS! |
| Kirian Pensky Lanatogue 2008-05-05 ch 8, | abuseCool chap...I lost my "Hope" long ago though lol. -Vampriss2 |
| Kirian Pensky Lanatogue 2008-05-05 ch 5, | abuseI have a friend named Hope...well we were friends until I found out that she cheated on my X-boyfriend(not really an X but,well ya get the idea).Well anyways nice chap. -Vampriss2 |