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KDR 2008-08-16 . chapter 1
*shivers* I've been there. I've so been there. A beautiful, painful reminder...of the razor's deceit.

TWLOHA is amazing! They helped me so much through my struggle of SI.
like-vines-we-intertwined 2008-07-21 . chapter 1
Dear Cutter,

I think I understand
I used to be like this
I used to think that it would help
I learned from it

x.Used to self harm
x.Miss.Twiztid.x 2008-03-13 . chapter 1
!

Oh my God, this poem hit very close to home. I've struggled with self-injury for a while and just recently gotten to the point where I can say I've put it behind me. I've read a lot of poems about the topic, but none quite as beautiful and powerful as yours.

I love how you captured the passive-aggressive relationship and personified the razor, for starters. You captured how destructive it is perfectly. And I love the second part, dedicated to the razor, where you find the strength to overcome it. S.I. is a serious and terrible thing, but poems like this and people like you are proof that it can be overcome. Not only that, but your imagery and the way the poem flows is amazing. You took something commonly seen as so ugly and made it beautiful by showing that it can be beat.

You did a fantastic job. This is going on my favs list pronto.
xfail 2008-03-09 . chapter 1
This really is true. I'm glad you're able to look at this situation with at least a bit of optimism, to know that there really is hope somewhere. A lot of people experience this, and I'm sure tons of them (me included) would be happy to read this!
theinfinitebee 2008-03-08 . chapter 1
Oh gosh. This is very, very deep. Very deep and very stunning. This gave me the chills, seriously. I especially love "Someday I'll no longer be an addict.
No longer be your puppet.
No longer your fool."
Well, no, I love the whole thing. Unfortunately for me to say, I can relate. Perhaps that is why I love it so much. New favourite.

~.Withstanding.
Michelladora Moon 2008-03-04 . chapter 1
I relate to this so well. I think I may relate to this one more than any of your other ones actually.. this is going on the favourites list. It's written perfectly and all of it is so true. And recovery is one of the greatest things ever :D
je suis une pomme du terre. 2008-03-04 . chapter 1
Me gusta mucho porque dice la verdad =P

lol

It's really good BECAUSE it's so true...

Cutting is a terrible addiction =X I'd rather like to kill razorblade. XD

Hopefully things are changing.

Sorry, crappy review. My eyes hurt. XD

Emily 2008-03-04 . chapter 1
Holy crap! I am in love w/ this peice. It's just amazing. wow.
Who says u can't be supergirl?! :)
purple x pen 2008-03-04 . chapter 1
i guess i can relate in the sense of believing something to be good for you and it turns out to totally mess you up, hope you get through this!!
kelsi bones 2008-03-04 . chapter 1
The deception of the blade in this is so true. I'm glad the subject is able to realize that deception, and start to break away.

I hope she makes it.

k.X
simpleplan13 2008-03-03 . chapter 1
I like the idea of it being a letter and the ending from recovering was a really nice piece.. I actually liked the second letter best though... i dunno the first one didnt seem as powerful, but it;s still a really nice piece
Can't Be Saved 2008-03-03 . chapter 1
OMG Chick, I really don't know what to say. I mean, it has some deep meaning behind it.
emily 2008-03-03 . chapter 1
I like them they are really good and there so real.
poemkitten7 2008-03-03 . chapter 1
Wow, very powerful and full of raw emotions. Definitely understandable. Keep up the great work. :) -Sara
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