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| xx 3DD Fan 2008-08-15 ch 1, | abusehaha That's funny! I love the way that you wrote it, too. You showed all of your thoughts so that we could follow your nervousness, shock, and excitement! |
| xXKirariXx 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseLMAO. That was pretty funny. I didn't see that coming. It'd be nice if you continued the story, but if you don't then that's okay. :) |
| The Toothpaste Fiend 2008-06-18 ch 1, | abuseDang! I wish my profs would be as hot as Kyle. The hottest one we got was thirty something, and he was very posh. Like, proper PJ 'how do you do?' posh. Lol about the old guy! So funny! |
| Let Them Eat Cake 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseThat is CLASSIC! OMG! This had me nearly (and literally) rolling on the floor, laughing my head off. Honest to God, you HAVE to continue this! To hell with it being a (an? Whatever...) oneshot! Please! Gosh this is great! And I can't believe this is based on a true story. Oh please, I pray college will be this amazing for me! Great job! This is AWESOMENESS in written form! =D Kay (Let Them Eat Cake) (PS: Great title! Hahaha!) |
| california kills 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseYOU MUST CONTINUE THIS STORY! you must you must you must you must you must you must you must you must you must you must...times infinity and one! ...please? *sad pouty face ensues* (imagine a cute little puppy dog, how could you say no to a puppy?) and this is autobiographical?! holy cow, i want to be you! don't you want to fulfill your little fantasies about hot-skater-teacher boy? ...please? ...pretty please? ...pretty pretty please? ...okay, i'm done annoying you now, i probably freaked you out lol. -Cali |
| Doom08 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseThe only thing I found wrong was the you spelled Front as Font. Other then that, I liked it, awesomeness. |
| LoveMySoul 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseHey, you should expand on this. I would love to see what could happen. |
| Belle Dame 2008-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abusewow...lol that was great!and how ironic...old man student and young hot teacher... |
| Enigmatic Margaret 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuseBahahahaha, that was awesome. I absolutely loved the old guy's line. “I knew I was going to feel old, but this is ridiculous.” It encompasses pretty much what all the people returning to tertiary education feel like. (I kind of talk to the old people in my lectures sometimes.. I'm not weird at all.) But they're really interesting, one guy told me about his granddaughter (who happened to be in his tutorial with him- aw) lol.. Anyhoo.. that was awesome. |
| cheimpo17 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseOMG!! I really like this. Too bad its just a one-shot, but in a way, I wouldn't have minded if you kept going. Very well executed. |
| KatieTheWriter 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseWhat a cute story! I love how the teacher was young and looked like a skater. I never had a teacher that cool! PLEASE continue this as an ongoing story! Just think of the drama; a teacher dating a student. By the way, amazing writing skills you have! I just pictured the entire scene as I read it. Incredible! Loved it. Okay...I'm done. Great job! |
| Twilight Starr 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseOh, this was a great story! I can believe it's true. It's absolutely hilarious. Nice work. :D ~Twilight Starr~ |
| found.eventually 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseaww. and they're not gonna get together? XP I liked it. It was cute! I hope i get a hot skaterboy as a college teacher. ... Fat chance. |
| Katie Saychiadu 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseYou know you're old when you're talking about "Skater shoes" and "Skater boy" lol!! That was so OUR generation and not the teenagers now... now he would be called "Emo Boy"! Anyway, I love this!! (I know, I know, do I hate anything of yours? NO!) I did predict as soon as he asked "Is this English 1100" that he was the teacher. What I didn't predict was that old guy really was just an old guy. I thought he would be the professor and hottie skater boy would be the TA or something. Anyway, don't call it a stupid story because it's not :) |