Technically, your poem is a bit of a contrast for me. On the one hand, you have some really nice enjambed lines. The opening line of the first and fourth stanzas are particularly effective.

On the other hand, the lack of punctuation undermines the enjambment because it makes it less clear which lines should be run-ons and which shouldn't. I would suggest adding in a bit more punctuation. I think it would really round the poem out.

- Esther, currently reviewing for the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile)

I love the ending a lot... two things seemed a bit off to me.. the left me seemed I dunno.. oddly placed? it seemed like it left you not that it left you wondering... and the not knowing is worse than confusion.. isn't the confusion a result of not knowing or am I missing something?

Anyhow the nicotine simile was really amazing.. and as I said I love the ending.. awesome piece