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| Dart Gray 2008-06-06 ch 3, | abuseThis is u n i q u e. Really new, and I love it. The movie thing is awesome. I see my boys in your boys, and that makes me smile. But yours are absolutely yours, and they are something totally special. I love it! I love your voice & kind of wish I had it. Keep going plz. -D.g. |
| gummybaby 2008-06-02 ch 3, | abusePoor akward Darby...I just want to hug him. Thanks for the update, it was great. |
| gummybaby 2008-04-02 ch 2, | abusethis story is just so darn pretty. The writing flows so nicely, if a bit sadly. Hopefully Ace will make Darby a bit happier... |
| Shampoo Suicide 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseYou're absolutely fantastic, you know. Hello, how have you been? |
| gummybaby 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. I like how you incorporate the scene descriptions to sound like movie shots, I didn't even notice when you eased out of it. Darby sounds sad, I hope he gets happy soon... I look foward to reading more! |