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Reviews For: The Movie of Darby Jane's Life

Dart Gray
2008-06-06
ch 3,
abuseThis is u n i q u e. Really new, and I love it. The movie thing is awesome. I see my boys in your boys, and that makes me smile. But yours are absolutely yours, and they are something totally special. I love it! I love your voice & kind of wish I had it. Keep going plz. -D.g.
gummybaby
2008-06-02
ch 3,
abusePoor akward Darby...I just want to hug him. Thanks for the update, it was great.
gummybaby
2008-04-02
ch 2,
abusethis story is just so darn pretty. The writing flows so nicely, if a bit sadly. Hopefully Ace will make Darby a bit happier...
Shampoo Suicide
2008-04-02
ch 1,
abuseYou're absolutely fantastic, you know.

Hello, how have you been?
gummybaby
2008-03-04
ch 1,
abuseVery nice. I like how you incorporate the scene descriptions to sound like movie shots, I didn't even notice when you eased out of it. Darby sounds sad, I hope he gets happy soon...

I look foward to reading more!
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