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| soccerfreak18 2008-07-28 ch 1,  | abuseI like this! I think that this is for this site but I think of it as for school. When teachers make kids write about stuff or poetry and they get slammed cuz its not "right". Its lame. This is awesome. Kee it up! |
| NovelJ 2008-07-10 ch 1, | abuseI think most anyone who's every posted a poem for public view can relate to the frustration in the poem. We aren't nessessarily writing for and to uphold the standards of somebody else. Great job! |
| samilizzy 2008-07-09 ch 1, | abuseNice. Very true. The choppiness works very well. |
| Lenora the Great 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseinteresting. almost hypocritical. but it amuses me. |
| kloun doll 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseoh my, that's true! everyone can write what they want to it's a powerful piece 'cause a lot of people could relate to this. |
| Johannas mirror 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseAnd I my dearest am here to nit-pick and unweave your words with critique After all You gave it to us and in writing so we give leave for retoric i may tell you what to do but you never have to listen |
| xoX-IHeartSureal-Xox 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseExactly. Perfect. I hate stupid people telling me to not put the stupid, comma, there, but, put, it, over, there, instead... I mean WTF? It's more about the content and what the content means to the author... and posting it is a way to get everything that it symbolises or displays OUT THERE and somehow a way of setting it free. And then theres always the chance that someone somewhere in some far away corner of the world kinda gets all you were trying to express and you can effect them for the good. Full stops and semi colons are just little marks that get abused (sometimes by accident sometimes on purpose) along the way. Sometimes you throw punctuation marks in to fluctuate between rythms... make your work off-beat. Sorry... your poem was exactly what I needed. Unfortunatly: this was just the ideal place to vent/rant... Anyways, that was ace. and it's going into my favourites list right...about...now... |
| Khia 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseHa! I love it. ^.^ My poetry usually comes out like this. This is the type I like to read: brevity has the largest impact. |
| andhearts 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseYes, I do agree. :D I DO NOT pay attention to correct poetry format. Bleh, it gives me a headache. :D I liked this a lot. And living the first 12 or so years of my life with my critisizing perfectionst of a sister I take grammar correction harder than most. lol. The least people on here cold do was be a little nice about it. :D Thanks for the review, I'm probably going to read some more of your stuff. :D *waves* |
| nineteenstars 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseamen to that. people who correct every minor detail really need to get a life. i read some of the other reviews for this, basically saying not to post it. but if they don't like it, why are they reading it? personally, i don't think that punctuation and all that ** they teach you about poetry in school means anything. it seems you write poetry for you, and i aplaud you for that. unlike some people on here, your poems are... raw i guess is the word im looking for. flowery words and over-correct grammer take that away. yours is probably some of the best poetry i have read on this site. |
| Midnight In Eden 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is probably the best definition of private poetry on FP. When you're ready to write public poetry, post it on FP. Til then, why bother posting in a public forum? Midnight |
| Mz. Malicious 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseFigured I'd read and review some of your stuff. And don't worry, I won't tell you how to correct your stuff. In my own opinion, anything that is written that comes from the soul is beautiful as is. You tell 'em! |
| rocky 2008-03-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhy post your poetry online in a public and freely accessible place then not accept criticism for it? Seems pig-headed. |
| burning in effigy 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuse"i write it for/my release,/my own profit, gain, peace of mind."- so ** true. and i like the small lines because they tend to make a clearer point; honest poem and i agree |
| Glowing Aura 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseYou need to capitalize "I". KIDDING! But seriously, I agree with this poem. If I want C/C then I'll ask for it, right? I usually do ask for C/C, but not everyone is like me. Anyway, ncie job on conveying your emotions. |