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Nice. Good use of repetition. :)

Awh. I liked this. It's bittersweet and super pretty. I loved your imagery as well.

"how can i define us?/when you and me only equates to nothing/more but a mere reflection of what we used to be"

I think you cut open my heart without realizing it. I'm reading what I've thought, but couldn't articulate. I'm rendered speechless, awestruck. This is just... wow.

I like the repetition and the descriptions of everything are really beautiful

"when between black and white
are empty spaces shaded with grey promises"

- love those lines. nice piece even if it was random ;)

a lot of sadness in this poem.. but not overly so

i like the repetition of "how can i define you?" and then the last one is "how can i define us?"- changes the mood/point of the poem at the very end, subtle but effective

"when i only end up whispering/sonnets in your sleep"- fav two lines. i reread it at least four time :]