Wow I'm really loving the story so far. Especially the whole Angels and Vampires thing its a good mix. I also like the sub stories that are going on, such as Ezekiel's sort of past story in chapter three. Oh and I really like Azrael he's really cool, and I like that he knows what's going on but he doesn't say much it adds more intrigue to the story. Can't wait for more!

I like the new addition! And toanswer the question from your PM the character Id love to hear more about is azrael. I'm not sure why, but I'm loving his character so far.

Even more intriguing! These first couple of chapters are very good, because they really capture interest then make the reader even more curious about what's going on.

I just want to mention that you described the color of her drink twice, and that seemed to be a little redundant. ^^;; Also, some of the transitions seem to happen a little fast. One second Kaiya is talking business, and the other she's out on the street talking to Azrael (who is totally awesome). I suggest lengthening the sentence to something a bit more than "She stood, paid for her drink, and left."

I really like this story though, and I can't wait for more!

Ok so I just read chap 2 XD

And I like it. Especially the way you describe things.
Such as the silver-amber colored drink. That entire section revolving around the drink was brilliant.

I have no idea why. I just love that kind of imagery.

Angels AND vampires? I like it already. ^^

It's very intriguing, and I'm very curious about all of the characters, especially Azrael. I wonder what would cause an angel of death to help a vampire . . .

"Humans are the only creatures allowed to ask for forgiveness and be given redemption"

I really liked that line, because it's something that I've considered before. Will you be doing more with the idea for this story? Because it's a fantastic theme!

I love this story! You've done a wonderful job with character development, and you really know how to get the reader hooked.It is wonderfully written, I can't wait to read more!! :)

I like this story and plot line so far, I am excited to see where the plot is going mainly due to your great use at drawing the reader in with such a quick character development.
Please post more and I will stay updated.
And you should check out my story too! Based on your style of writing I think you would enjoy it