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Reviews For: Wonders of an Inloved Girl

Sebastian Osprey
2008-05-20
ch 1,
Lovely idea, and some of your rhymes are absolutely beautiful. In future, I'd suggest paying a little more attention to rhythm, but tyhis is wonderful work as is.
Osprey
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