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ilovetheopera
2008-03-05
ch 1,
dark, but not too much so, and appropriate. interesting ending.

i especially like the first verse, and the practically non-existent second verse.

'nature of my bones' reminds me of the alice sebold novel 'the lovely bones' but i dont think it's related. good work!
siphoned afterglow
2008-03-04
ch 1,
wow, yeah this is really good.

'seep into concrete
metal linoleum glass
i am the chipping lead paint and then
i am the cold and the pavement the brittle blue light'

the imagery was just amazing. you are so talented. wonderful work
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