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| ilovetheopera 2008-03-05 ch 1, | dark, but not too much so, and appropriate. interesting ending. i especially like the first verse, and the practically non-existent second verse. 'nature of my bones' reminds me of the alice sebold novel 'the lovely bones' but i dont think it's related. good work! |
| siphoned afterglow 2008-03-04 ch 1, | wow, yeah this is really good. 'seep into concrete metal linoleum glass i am the chipping lead paint and then i am the cold and the pavement the brittle blue light' the imagery was just amazing. you are so talented. wonderful work |