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MAGICAL.NARRATOR. 2008-12-12 . chapter 5
i really liked this story. I liked how the characters emotions are express by simple body language instead of heavy dialog. Its a very unique story. =]
Midnights Scream 2008-04-05 . chapter 5
I like it, but at the same time I'm completely disturbed.
Mademoiselle Rouge 2008-03-27 . chapter 5
Very cute.
misery sister 2008-03-25 . chapter 4
Great story so far! Keep it up! :D
Ty Taco 2008-03-25 . chapter 4
Great chapter.
I absolutely LOVE your story.
Keep writing, because your an amazing author.

xoxoxo,
Ty
Mademoiselle Rouge 2008-03-25 . chapter 4
Aww Seth is such a good guy :)
Can't wait for an update !
Ty Taco 2008-03-16 . chapter 3
Oh.
Mi.
God.

Your story is absolutely PHENOMENAL!!
I LOVE every second of it.

And this is going to sound horrible, but it will almost not be believable if you have an 18 yr old gay male NOT say yes.

I'm sure it will be amazing either way, but I kinda hope you pick sex.
lol

xoxo,
Ty
Mademoiselle Rouge 2008-03-16 . chapter 3
What ? Nothing explicit ?! Just joking, don't worry :)
There are two types of stories I love - the ones where the main character is lost in the middle of nowhere (or in a small village, caravan in the middle of the desert, whatever) and the fantastic/fairytale-like stories. You have both ! Hurrah !
Don't understand why you don't have more reviews, though, coz this story is good :)
Hope you'll update soon !
shes-an-open-book 2008-03-10 . chapter 2
This is intriguing. I'm curious to see what comes out of it :)
HGiel 2008-03-07 . chapter 2
Interesting story! Nicely done!
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