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Reviews For: Swan Bathing in Innocence

Midnights Scream
2008-04-05
ch 5,
abuseI like it, but at the same time I'm completely disturbed.
Mademoiselle Rouge
2008-03-27
ch 5,
abuseVery cute.
misery sister
2008-03-25
ch 4,
abuseGreat story so far! Keep it up! :D
Ty Taco
2008-03-25
ch 4,
abuseGreat chapter.
I absolutely LOVE your story.
Keep writing, because your an amazing author.

xoxoxo,
Ty
Mademoiselle Rouge
2008-03-25
ch 4,
abuseAww Seth is such a good guy :)
Can't wait for an update !
Ty Taco
2008-03-16
ch 3,
abuseOh.
Mi.
God.

Your story is absolutely PHENOMENAL!!
I LOVE every second of it.

And this is going to sound horrible, but it will almost not be believable if you have an 18 yr old gay male NOT say yes.

I'm sure it will be amazing either way, but I kinda hope you pick sex.
lol

xoxo,
Ty
Mademoiselle Rouge
2008-03-16
ch 3,
abuseWhat ? Nothing explicit ?! Just joking, don't worry :)
There are two types of stories I love - the ones where the main character is lost in the middle of nowhere (or in a small village, caravan in the middle of the desert, whatever) and the fantastic/fairytale-like stories. You have both ! Hurrah !
Don't understand why you don't have more reviews, though, coz this story is good :)
Hope you'll update soon !
shes-an-open-book
2008-03-10
ch 2,
abuseThis is intriguing. I'm curious to see what comes out of it :)
HGiel
2008-03-07
ch 2,
abuseInteresting story! Nicely done!
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