 MousaS 2008-09-07 . chapter 2Ooh, very inspiring imagery. |
 Faith Adeline 2008-04-29 . chapter 5nice. I liked it. Just be careful about spelling errors and proof-read, and be careful about run-on sentences. Other than that, keep it up!
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I think I've mentioned Hansel and Gretel, so how about. . .hmm. . . A horror touch on the Snow Queen would be cool. The story is by Hans Christian Anderson, one of my favorites. Just an idea :) |
 WanderingTeen 2008-04-29 . chapter 5Allas, poor Geppeto. All he wanted was a son and he got something far more sinister. I'm glad you updated and I'm excited to see what happens in the next installment of Pinochio's grousome story. |
 WanderingTeen 2008-04-07 . chapter 4Little Red Riding Hood actually used to give me nightmares and I've always liked it. I love how you've re-done it. |
 Fictionette 2008-04-03 . chapter 2Interesting... |
 Faith Adeline 2008-04-02 . chapter 4lol, nice job. can't wait for more, so be sure to update soon! Oh, and a good fairy tale to do? Hanzel and gretel. Ja. lol.
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 WanderingTeen 2008-03-19 . chapter 3I love the history you gave on the tree. I don't think I've ever seen a version that personifies the tree before Pinocio is created, and I like how the tree is so full of hatred and killing makes it glad... as twisted as that makes em sound :). Take your time writting the next part, but when it's posted I'll be back to review! |
 Faith Adeline 2008-03-17 . chapter 3I liked it. I think you should do like, an evil little mermaid lmao. Keep it up and update soon.
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 SoggySoul 2008-03-17 . chapter 3I noticed some typos, but other than that it's very good so far. Beautifully twisted. I can't wait to read the rest. |
 Faith Adeline 2008-03-05 . chapter 2wow, I loved it. Great job!
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 Faith Adeline 2008-03-04 . chapter 1reepy. . . haha. I loved it. Keep it up and update soon!
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 Snowin 2008-03-04 . chapter 1I like this one =)
Can't wait for another |
 WanderingTeen 2008-03-04 . chapter 1I've always liked twisted Fairytales, but this one was eerily entertaining. I can't wait for more! |