Reviews for Poetic Exodus - FictionPress.com

wordsofjade 2008-04-01 ch 1,	abuseYour poetry makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside!! lol I absolutely adore the way you paint pictures with your words and put things into perspective! You have a true talent! :)
Alphabetical Dreams 2008-03-11 ch 1,	abusesuch lovely word choice you have!! (spilt is so much better than spilled) and i love the line: "in the scorching blank-slate sand" it's a wonderful image! i admire your use of this idea!! it's a hard thing to pull off, and you've done it quite well. as always, your imagery is clear and colorful, it's lovely the way you've captured htis idea wihtout actually ever explaining it! live, laugh, love. C. a D.
Isabella22 2008-03-04 ch 1,	abuseI really liked it! The words flowed nicely, and the images where depicted perfectly. Good job!
Yorke Knight 2008-03-04 ch 1,	abuseI really like this. It is extremely true-of most writers anyway. This is my favorite part: "They rain back down into empty ink wells To be drawn forth through black-stained fingertips, And smeared across an empty page;" Nicely done. :)