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| Zaynab 2008-03-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi i'd just liek to say that this story is a very interesting read. very well wriiten and interesting. I love the way you use descriptions it makes charachters appearnaces and charachteristics very clear. i would love to continue and read more. It's even good enough to be published. Really good. Keep writing. xx |