Brilliant, this is hilarious. Just one thing, I know you were using excessive 'did's for effect, but it got a bit wearing after a while. Maybe prune them out a little.

But I can totally sympathise with poor Edwick, who obviously hasn't got a clue.

How those squires can follow their lords so blindly, I'll never know...but it's still amusing to read a story from their perspective. Nice job!

This was funny! Short, but good. Are there more Wondrous Tales of the Noble Sir Gwaith? Could we read them?

This isn't a real review so sorry. I tried to send you a PM message but it was being a loser. My mac computer doesn't allow me to see images and after i tried to send the PM it asked me to type in the words but it wouldn't let me see the image. So, this is really a PM in disguise as a review. I have to questions: Do you live in Utah and how old are you? I ask these cuz most mormons live in utah and you said MAN behind the story so i wondered how old that MAN was.

Jet