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stained blue 2008-06-16 . chapter 1
the poem seems so miserable & revengeful in that
heartwrenching little way, the second stanza seemed
a bit odd and out of touch to me but everything else
was beautiful, i love it.
gg. lass 2008-03-04 . chapter 1
this is amazing.
i know exactly how that felt...

yours until the wind changes,
Lost
citrus traffic 2008-03-04 . chapter 1
oh my god, this is amazing! the imagery is amazing. I see like someone eating a big messy slice of cake with blood red icing.
*favs*
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