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systematic surprise
2008-06-19
ch 1,
abusei like it, there are so many ways to interpret it!
Skystripe
2008-06-06
ch 1,
abuseBrilliant
East-0f-Eden
2008-06-05
ch 1,
abusewow, you're expressive. even if this poem is short. kudos!
StarGazer88
2008-04-21
ch 1,
abuseSummed up very beautifully. You captured it just right. Perhaps the reason Invisible is capitalised is because it's a certain separate class of people? Just a thought!
Thoughtful Silence
2008-04-17
ch 1,
abuseWhoa, I really liked this! It's so true to life! The 7-7-7 syllable structure was unique and I thought the capital in invisible was an effective touch. Loved the title by the by.

-Silence
The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abuseI love being alone or just quiet. I liked how you wrote this, it's cool.
Leigh B.
2008-03-21
ch 1,
abuse"You sit forgotten on your throne." This line really grabbed me, for its beautifully written. I found it interesting that you used a 7-7-7 syllabic structure instead of the mostly known 5-7-5, but it flows nicely.
This is a well-written haiku.
Written
2008-03-04
ch 1,
abusewow, awesome. the last line is perfect! I don't usually take to haiku, but you win.
Walrus Lover 2.0
2008-03-04
ch 1,
abuseI'm loud and I sit in the back. This hurts me.

-Wally
LateNightChild
2008-03-04
ch 1,
abusei like it. i love the title
arwenfrodogurl
2008-03-04
ch 1,
abusePerfect. You've said so much with so little. From a quiet one-this is beautiful.
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