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| systematic surprise 2008-06-19 ch 1, | abusei like it, there are so many ways to interpret it! |
| Skystripe 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-06-05 ch 1, | abusewow, you're expressive. even if this poem is short. kudos! |
| StarGazer88 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseSummed up very beautifully. You captured it just right. Perhaps the reason Invisible is capitalised is because it's a certain separate class of people? Just a thought! |
| Thoughtful Silence 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseWhoa, I really liked this! It's so true to life! The 7-7-7 syllable structure was unique and I thought the capital in invisible was an effective touch. Loved the title by the by. -Silence |
| The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseI love being alone or just quiet. I liked how you wrote this, it's cool. |
| Leigh B. 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuse"You sit forgotten on your throne." This line really grabbed me, for its beautifully written. I found it interesting that you used a 7-7-7 syllabic structure instead of the mostly known 5-7-5, but it flows nicely. This is a well-written haiku. |
| Written 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abusewow, awesome. the last line is perfect! I don't usually take to haiku, but you win. |
| Walrus Lover 2.0 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseI'm loud and I sit in the back. This hurts me. -Wally |
| LateNightChild 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abusei like it. i love the title |
| arwenfrodogurl 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abusePerfect. You've said so much with so little. From a quiet one-this is beautiful. |