I'm sorry, I hope I wasn't to harsh before b/c I really do like this story, and this chappie was better w/ character development Can't wait to read the next one :)

Aah its so good! Can't wait for the next chapter!

real good! a few spelling mistakes here and there, but really good! and is her name pronounced lee or lay? i've heard it both ways and spelled leigh...thanks! keep writing! i wanna read on!

Nice story here, really creative. Just quickly, I think you should give more of a character to Leigh b/c all we see now is this scared, self pitying person and I know there is more to it than that. Keep writing

keep writing

Finally an update... keep going!

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This was a great update. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!

That last paragraph was creepy... update soon! And I like the name you chose, Marion Thorne. How'd you come up with it?

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I can't believe she escaped...that was pure luck! I can't wait to see what happens next.

That guy is some sick wacko person... killing is an art? But anyway, nice... the chapters are kinda short, but that just might be because I'm used to super-long ones. I'm not saying the chappies must lengthen, but just commenting. Do whatever works for you as the author. :) And maybe the sidekick person has some secret tricks up his sleeves, no?

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Very intriguing story. I can't wait for the next chapter, update soon.

ooh... what happens next? Poor girls...

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Wow, chilling. But nothing super bad is happening cuz it's not rated M, right? Anyway, great start - please continue this story!

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My word. The conversation at the end-"You still like your women blonde?" It froze my blood.

Chilling, sickening, and fascinating. Please write more.