Thought I'd read your original piece and see how it was...

Loved it! Very good so far, interesting, wonderful characters, you're so talented at making realistic characters to love and feel for, so many depths! You're awesome, keep it up ^^b

this story was definitely amazing. Excellent piece of writing. I sincerely can't wait for the next book. I also vote that we learn why anubis can't cast.

The horrible thing about Fictionpress is that good Fantasy stories are forgotten by the swarm of badly written romance.
You definitely deserve more reviews/praise becaue this was great. :)

Good luck with future writing!

I'm so jealous of you and your kick ** writing. I hope you decide to continue with this,(please please please don't leave me hanging AGAIN, I can't take much more of this cruelty) I'm really interested to see what happens to Galen.

...holy crap--YOU AND YOUR DAMN CLIFFHANGER ENDINGS WOMAN. AGH. -useless strangling motions- YOUR AND YOUR OBSESSION FOR STABBING YOUR MAIN CHARACTERS IN THE GUTS -moar the strangling- You--YOU CAN'T KEEP INTRODUCING CHARACTERS AND MAKING US LOVE THEM AND THEN HAVE THEM SHANKED. -oh the strangle-

...yeah, okay, anyways. DEAR MAR I'VE FORGOTTEN HOW MUCH I LOVE YOUR WRITING. No seriously, I have. Don't take that as a veiled attempt at pushing you back to the Return, cuz it's very much not. I'VE JUST MISSED YOU IN GENERAL. Why in the heck haven't I already read this?! Bah, whatever, I'M HOOKED NOW.

Oh, and just an after-thought--you have NO CLUE how amused I was to learn that the desert city was called Haven. It made the Jaktard inside me oh so very happy, considering it's EXACTLY THE SAME THERE. Anyways XD GLORIOUS! As always! I'm really glad you requested something from this! Now I just gotta PICK something! THERE'S SO MUCH I LOVED! Galen and the Priest especially, though I don't think I could do the jackal mask justice. Perhaps the oh, so tense scene where he pulls out the paladin mask? M, skulls.

..yeah