|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is one of those, "The truth hurts, don't it?" pieces. It's very much the way life really is; as much as we want to think we're making a difference, evil still exists, people will continue to do things the way they've always been done, just because that's human nature. I did see the two different speakers in this. I could see this being a sort of PSA or something, with the "Yeah, right," person just walking away at the end. Nice work. Keep writing! :) |