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| messy bun 2008-06-10 ch 1,  | abuseAw, this was really, really adorable. I had the biggest grin on my face while I was reading it. :) |
| dappleddakota 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseAwe, I liked it! That was cute. :D I want me one o' them Christian boyfriends. ;) And yes, I do realize that sentence was a grammatical nightmare. haha. Short, sweet, to the point, not preachy, but it presented the correct Christian views. Awesome. |
| d666lisa 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseWow... I read a lot of stories on fictionpress but I don't think I've read one like this before :) |
| Sour Lullaby 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseAw, so beautiful. Men need to be like this. |
| Camelia Sinensis 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseSweet, I guess! ;] |
| writingxonxwalls 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseAW! I want a Christian boyfriend now... (: Awesome humor- ! It was fantastical- keep up the work!! |
| notebaggage 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseAw! I love this story, it was so cute! It really made my day! C: |
| ice-cold-pepsi 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abusecute =] and yep, u gotta love God 2 :) |
| Lily Llynn 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseCute. If only all guys could be so considering and awesome. But I guess that's what stories are for. (: I'm glad found.eventually suggested this, even though it's cute, it's sweet and pretty well-written, so I'll go add it to my c2 now. (: |
| astraeos 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseHaha, that's really cute! Sweet concept and it was nicely written. |
| Jazzytea 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseYeah, you gotta love Christian boyfriends like him- IF YOU CAN FIND ONE ;_; Very cute story. Kinda wished there were more thoughts running through the narrator's head, there wasn't very much about her being touched by his actions. Shoot. I'd be. I wish I could find a guy who actually cared about my purity! XD. Ah wells. Cute story nonetheless! |
| Boone 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abusebeing a Christian father... of a Christian daughter.. praying for a Christian husband... it made me smile and gave be great hope for my amazing daughter. Thanks so much for sharing this story with all of us... |
| artistic dreamer 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseinteresting one shot! never read anything like this, now i wish i could go find a nice Christian boyfriend who would do that and actually wait and pray to God. that would be awesome! |
| CassandraRose526 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseI liked the closing sentence; it was super cute. And I do love those Christian boyfriends. (Not that going to a Christian college has gotten me anywhere yet . . .) I think it's funny that he went outside and started running; it's very sweet. I actually have a story similar to this . . . well, okay, it has to do with a kiss and a Christian boyfriend, but same diff! At the risk of selling my own story through a review (which I rarely do, btw), it's called An Honest Answer. Again, I loved this story; I'm favoriting it! Cassandra |
| TydesTurn 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseAn amazing view of the contributions God has on the lives of the younger generations. Also a brilliant understanding of purity and faith. |