Awh this is cute :D

Aw... cute!

Good. Really. But, kinda short. I think you could extend another chap.

This is really cute.

I once had a teacher tell me that a short story should just be a snapshot of someone's life. It doesn't need to tell the whole story just one momment of it. I think you did this really well.

Plus...major bonus points for the best guy pal thing...I'm a sucker for cliches

I like how you have the Cinderella story dresses part. At first I didn't like the name Izzy, but then I grew used to it. =]
Love the ending
Why do you always have to be such a downer Izzy, you -you need to seperate these with a '?'
I’ll get out of your way, you have a nice

okay im going to be harsh with this critique.
so ready yourself! :D
basically, there needs much more development that lead up to the ending. Right now, it seems kind of random.
Also, there were some grammatical errors/awkward sentences.
"she pretended like she didn’t notice them, pretended not to see their fake curls, and their dresses that looked like they plucked them straight from a Cinderella Story" good word/adjective choice, but awkward parallel sentence structure (she pretended not to notice them, pretended not to see... pretended not to see their dresses < you need to either add the dress part to the hair, or write another 'pretended')

"Izzy had waited for two months, putting on her best smile and staring into moss colored eyes,(