I love this poem. The imagery is so powerful. Good work!

wow. the imagery, my goodness. I love it. sadly, I can relate to this too.
another one for the favs.
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veryvery nice:) i really like itXD

I love the imagery in this. My favorite is "st-st-stuttering". I don't know, it just makes it more real and more like someone is speaking than the reader just reading. :) Wonderful job.

i really liked this. maybe because i can really relate to it. i think the imagery/description was just loverrly. good work. keep writing. =]