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| Kaleidoscope23 2008-03-04 ch 1,  | abuseI love this poem. The imagery is so powerful. Good work! |
| carousel chorus 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abusewow. the imagery, my goodness. I love it. sadly, I can relate to this too. another one for the favs. x.CC |
| daretobe-dIfFeRnT 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseveryvery nice:) i really like itXD |
| Falcon0Rider 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseI love the imagery in this. My favorite is "st-st-stuttering". I don't know, it just makes it more real and more like someone is speaking than the reader just reading. :) Wonderful job. |
| smile for the sunshine 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abusei really liked this. maybe because i can really relate to it. i think the imagery/description was just loverrly. good work. keep writing. =] |