Deep. Apparently I'm not the only one mildly interested in English class. I like this. It's sad, but it's good.

"Her husband before
And her daughter behind."

That really choked me up!

Great Work!
P.&F.

Being Jewish, I have a special place in my heart for writing devoted to exposing that monster that is: holocaust. It should never be forgotten, and I found your poem quite moving, however there was one typo "her lasts moments" you mean "last moments" right?--anyways :) good job

really powerful piece... and the title is beautiful... the idea of humming is an interesting juxtaposition and well done