I am enjoying this... I dunno what you'd call it... story (for lack of a better word). The unreal connection between this and the high school I go to is what gets me, I could name a few people to fit every slot and personality.

Keep it up, I'll keep an eye out.

-Mob

Haha this is really clever! I love the tone of voice you're writing in! Eddie's description was the best. In Narnia...lol I'll definitely be back to read more! :)

that was so funny i was laughing threw the whole thing!

It sounds cool so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!

very well writen
you have a clear voice
i like it
can't wait for an update!

This looks like it will be really good! I loved all the cynicism, and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.