This is really fun! I've read your stories in . I really like the Kyoshi hold'em story. it's nice and funny like this one. Hope you write more

Oh my God, this was so much fun to read. Anna is so entertaining. I'm sorry I didn't find out about this sooner.

I am enjoying this... I dunno what you'd call it... story (for lack of a better word). The unreal connection between this and the high school I go to is what gets me, I could name a few people to fit every slot and personality.

Keep it up, I'll keep an eye out.

-Mob

Haha this is really clever! I love the tone of voice you're writing in! Eddie's description was the best. In Narnia...lol I'll definitely be back to read more! :)

that was so funny i was laughing threw the whole thing!

It sounds cool so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!

very well writen

you have a clear voice

i like it

can't wait for an update!

This looks like it will be really good! I loved all the cynicism, and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.