|Reviews for Steel is Life|
| simpleplan13 3/8/08 . chapter 1
It is all the same to you isn’t it?... you, isn't it?
I like the sugar, snow thing.. it's interesting.. I also like the line "the safest substances" it was nice alliteration and again interesting... that you think they are the sagest substances... the ending is nice too with you being addicted and them being bored... a nice contrast... one thing I think you repeated snow a lot, but other than that its a nice piece
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| FellowMan 3/4/08 . chapter 1
great metaphors, the fleeting quality of snow, child-hood, helplessness, they all come across quite well; there's a nice touch of cryptic undertones as well.