Reviews for Fires of Renegation

Reviews For: Fires of Renegation

helixdown 2008-05-07 ch 2,	abuseAlas! An update! I've been waiting a while for one of these! Great chapter, really enjoyed it. But actually, if you would, i would like to ask a question, its kinda random, but do you plan out your story before hand or make it up as you go along? Im just trying to get some feedback from other authors.
Mel-Girl -using a fake emai... 2008-05-07 ch 2, anon.	abuseBwahaha I made a fake email. If it doesn't show up fully, it's this: too_lazy_to_log_in @lazemail.n00b. Ignore the spaces. Anywho, right, review chapter. I liked it! Good job, Roma-kun! XD Excuse my horribly unoriginal/weird/whatever review but I'm really cold and have to wash dishes like right after this and I better get to them... And so, until the next update or MSN chat... Adios! Mel-Girl.
helixdown 2008-03-19 ch 1,	abuseThis story is really interesting! I love Caius, he's awesome, and for some reason i have a feeling Lysander and Caius are gonna end up fighting each other. Man! That'd be so awesome going through one of these exams! WOOH! Okay, now that i'm calm and rational, i'll say this, very good, so far its original, though its hard to say because its only the first chapter, quite enjoyable, and few, if any mistakes. Keep up the good work and update soon please! Oh, and if you would find it in your convienince, i would very much appreciate it if you would so kindly check out my story "the war to end all wars". Again, only if you want. I'm sorry, i'm not very good at asking favors am i?
The Syn of Man 2008-03-06 ch 1,	abuseHmm. I liked your description of the battle scene, though you described Carius as a genius at battle, then had him dissapoint me, almost, in the test. He was stupid, relying too much on his skill, rather than on tatic. Just my kind of character. lol IF you would, please review my story, Shattered Dreams, or Crimson Grave, if you'd prefer.
Mel-Girl 2008-03-04 ch 1,	abuseYo! As I've checked over this before you submitted, I already told you what you need to work on. Anyhow, Caius amuses me. How naive and clueless he can be... But at the same time, I can already see the development coming up ahead for him without even asking ya! Lysander and Aemilia seem to share a slight thing in that they make a big fuss over Caius' mistakes. Someone give Caius a break! Though Elite in the fic so soon? Ah well, maybe I'm not reading carefully enough... Who knows? I'll add this to alerts so I'll be the first to know when you've updated! Adios! Mel-Girl.

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