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CharlotteBradhadair 2009-08-13 . chapter 1
casanova is a great movie! good story!
charlotte
Reader-of-All 2009-07-28 . chapter 1
I love your story! I was just wondering what happens to Zoe. I mean, she goes out with this guy for what was it--two months? And she admitts she loves him, and he just runs away! Being a geek myself, I would assume that Zoe has probably never had a boyfriend, never been asked out, never said that she loves someone who wasn't family. I was just thinking that maybe Matt should have stuck around a bit, told Zoe that he just realized that he's in love with Rachel, rather than one day at school Zoe seeing her ex-boyfriend with his best friend and knowing why she got dumped. I just think that you left her in a very vulnerable position. She's just had her heart broken and has no clue what just happened. Just something to think about. :-) Apart from that loose end, I really do love your story. Keep writing!
~Amanda
dark jam 2009-05-21 . chapter 1
Very nicely done! It's great that you were able to put in so many quotes!! BTW, I loved his confession. The "I hate you because blah blah blah, but I love you 'coz you etcetera etcetera etcetera." Made me think of '10 Things I Hate About You.' Have you seen that movie? It's awesome!! Gosh, I love modern Shakespeare.
Duuude 2009-01-02 . chapter 1
Aw. This is so cute. I love the quote theme. And I really really like his quote. Very, very unique of him. Finally some originality. I mean those guys came up with those quotes, get your own!

XD

I need to watch Casanova, I feel stupid for not having seen it.

Anyway, Ray and Mattie are too cute. I love how awkward they were about liking each other but then she laughed and ran into his arms anyway. Aww. Me love story. Caveman speak for this was a lovely read.
Sankyuu very much. =)
toffeecakesxox. 2008-12-07 . chapter 1
It took a while, but that ending was the cutest thing I've ever read. Matt's own words are better than any movie quote, honestly. So amazing. I enjoyed the length - really built up the story for the big, adorable finish at the end! :D

Definitely faving!

-toffeecakesxox.
moshpitqueen 2008-11-29 . chapter 1
Haha,I loved the movie quotes. When I read the part about the six smiles, I was all, "ZOMG, WIN A DATE WITH TAD HAMILTON!"

Although I disagree about the Josh Duhamel bit. Topher Grace is still the cutie in that movie for me. :P

Great story!
Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2008-11-25 . chapter 1
So sweet! Matt was totally adorable. Great job!! :P
In-Between-the-Lines 2008-11-23 . chapter 1
You have no idea how much I love all your fluffy little oneshots! They're just so cute! If only love could always be so wonderful and simple. :)
khale 2008-07-27 . chapter 1
so cute! it's been in my to-do list to read all your stories since...yesterday. and i've already read three!
righthere431 2008-07-07 . chapter 1
lol that is so cute
Jayjack 2008-06-26 . chapter 1
awe that was wow. ahah. :D
woodstock1969 2008-06-10 . chapter 1
Hey! I'm not sure how I managed never to stumble upon this before, but it's brilliant! Inspiration comes from the strangest of places, eh? Great job!
gulistanlik 2008-05-10 . chapter 1
You know I think I wouldn't be able to tell if a guy was movie-quoting mainly because I'm not a normal teenager as I don't watch many movies. Rarely, actually.

Ah man I hate that she was a silly girl for putting herself through all that trouble. Did she have to deliberately try and set him up? Was it the only way he would realise that she is the one for her? =D

gulistanlik
TwinkleHeart 2008-04-20 . chapter 1
AWW!
Lily Llynn 2008-04-09 . chapter 1
Fluffy. Cute. Obvious from the beginning, but that makes it all the cuter. (: Love the characters, love the very original idea, and love love love the oneshot. (: I'm very awesomely happy that Queen of Absolutely Everything added this to our c2. (:
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